Thursday, September 13, 2007

No need...:-)


How many pieces do u want?
Just chop it once I plead,
My heart is not a piece of stone,
Yet, I wont impede.

Strike it once, it splits up wide,
its not so large indeed,
Make it as much worse u can,
I promise it wd never...
...ever find ur need!

13 september 2007.

8 comments:

Manee said...

yar tu toh din b din badhia poems likhne lagi hai...
this one's too nice!

Prachi said...

And as I watch the blood
Trickle slowly from my vein,
One more cut U make,
Just to make me feel the pain.

A new pleasure U have found
To slit my very skin
Only to watch,
Blood ooze from within.
Indeed...it wud never
...ever find ur need!!


Its v.v.nice!!!:)
din know u write so well!!

tenebrous said...

givin it a further thot...i hardly knw nethin abt u!
hw wud i knw nethin abt ur writings???@.@
lol!

factually fantastic said...

haanji.....
Actually kisi ne mana kiya tha wo poem publish karney ke liye....isiliye.....nahi post kari.....plus mera man bhi nahi that poem ko publish karney ka....
aur batao ji?

Cinephile said...

Tell me how far you want to go
do you want to see him on the floor - Yes
do you want him to kneel before you
do you want him to beg for mercy

usmani said...

how cd u b so sure if itz 'him ' or 'her'...

n as for ur questions....
yeah i do wanna reach a farther stage... a really farther one...w/o him/her.. away from him/her...

n NO 2 d next one buddy--
coz there's jz one thing i want from dat person... dat sole thing dat he/she can actualy give...--
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--NOTHING...

usmani said...

@manee..
well, ek hi toh faayeda hai dukhi hone ka.. badhiya badhiya poems nikal kar aati hai n dat too unintentionally...lol!..

usmani said...

@prachi..
well, a nice piece from u'r side too buddy.. i wd say it's a better n a tougher one too...
n yeah m sure we'll gonna b going really farther wid our relationship together... there's much of a common thread i can feel n inspiration dat i can gain from dat side...
:-)