When with such an ease
could smone kiss the sky,
Ne'er with much o' failure
Any one would satisfy!
ever would some1 smile
o'er the tasks so lame,
However worse it may be
It's not she, da 1 o'er the blame!
When you understand and hug
-a brute or a beast
When sin to a priest
is no better than a feast!
When you need it most
and want it not,
When mediocrity wins
the finest lot!
When a poet without a heart
is proud lyke never,
When a writer with no word
-is the best ever!
When you see, hear
n cannot sense,
and u sure apprehend
with zero clemens!
When a drop cleanse off
the impressions on the shore,
When the pumping heart
-beats no more!
An inquisitive mind
where curiosity ends,
When a wink suffice
d whole offence!
When the host instilled with virus
-starts enjoying the infection,
Is this what is called....
............Achieving Perfection..??!!
19th Feb 2008
2 comments:
"The most" beautiful piece of poetry i've come across in a long long time..One of the best to say the least..Im adding to my favorites!! :)
Achieving perfection huh?You are inspired to move or act in ways never imagined.You become poetry in motion. Joy unleashed. And there is no end to what you can do, no limit to what you might achieve... Even if u r a writer with no words..!!Right?
I've totally surrendered my thoughts to this poetry of urs.. (:
Keep writing girll!!
When you need it most
and want it not,
When mediocrity wins
the finest lot! :)
thanx a lot for such a nice comment ..n yeah m looking forward to a really positive one from ur side buddy..
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