A touch of spring,- to the withered
A flickering flame in the dark!
Thats how it starts every stretch-
Ending it up with another embark...
Twas your game to win! wasn't it?
You played it well ~applaud~
but even before you could reach to endure
I pulled the triumphant cord...
Twas never to win or to let you down
to bring you lie this low!
n see I've brought you down to this state
--Without even letting you know!!!
Ignited to lead, it's broiling hard,
-with summing fuel and hotter!
But to remind you dude, ma sweet li'l chump
'THe flame doth not carouse THE WATER'
I enjoyed being a part of your game
You've seen me coy n low!
and if you think u'r making me fall--
then yeah,, m falling to grow...!!
2 comments:
'THe flame doth carouse THE WATER'
Your poetry gets better by the day!
Loved it!
:)
Hey its 'doth not'...(guessed i missed dat one)
but gawd u cd jst not miss the obliterated part...
~m utterly AMAZED~...
the whole poem revolves around this line... n was actually coerced to let it in...
kudos mayn
u forced me to believe
'THe flame duz carouse the water...'
... just gav it a new meaning...Ms Fire sign...
thanx for highlighting it newayz.....
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